Wednesday, 18 November 2009

  • 2nd version--DIA DE LLUVIA/A day spent taking the water

    DIA DE LLUVIA/
    A day spent taking the water
    Version Two

    I bathe by the spring, au' naturale,
    obscured by trees, apparently refreshed,
    natures latest prodigy. From the opulent
    goblet emits a soft cough and spitting.

    Heavy drops plop atop the clay,
    avid to be supped. The stiff
    ribbon of road tacks finally
    attaining the blue sky spring

    Heaven accepts offerings:
    which the sky restores as bounty--
    Thirsting to grow, Parched
    with expansive desire!

    Leaves no longer tremble
    in the icy breeze, they are
    drapery spread to dry
    in the cool alpine sun.

    Hidden is the love of doves,
    Why has life's cooing not been
    banished for disturbing silence
    with such piercing coos....

    Their song has softened,
    the mud bath readied,
    impregnated with spring--
    kneaded with broken herbs.

    Beauty is no fault--such
    comely trees, infuse with serenity.
    Into the spring I dissolve
    into a second bath of tears.
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